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 Yuujin Ihen (Redone)

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Yuujin
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Yuujin


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Join date : 2011-04-24
Location : You see that guy in the window?

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PostSubject: Yuujin Ihen (Redone)   Yuujin Ihen (Redone) I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 16, 2011 10:47 pm

Name: Ihen Yuujin

Rank: Lt.

Age: Actual: 899 Physical: 18

Appearance: Yuujin Ihen (Redone) 10-71

Gender: Male

Personality: Right off the bat, Yuujin isn't much to look, at, but he hides who he is behind his mask of identity. A Natural born thinker, Yuujin is usually one to think things through and plan out all possibilities before taking action. This can be both a blessing and a curse. His quick thinking and analysis of everything has gotten him out of many situations before. He cannot stand the great line dividing fact and fiction, and tries every way possible to prove the one who believes in fiction wrong. He will not stand for listening to untrue facts. If he hears anything untrue, such as the wretched Santa Claus, he will go to any extent to make the person convinced he is real to realize that the fat man is nothing but a myth. The only myth he will tolerate is the idea of ghosts because, well, he is a ghost, in a way.

His hardheadedness is also a great factor of who he is. He won't take no for an answer, no matter what, and is very thick-skinned. He always thinks he is right, until proven wrong. He also has a very hot temper. He tends to go crazy when angered, and it will take a fair amount of time for someone to calm him down. He also can be a bit of a flirt when provoced by a female, but what male human isn't? Yuujin never backs down from a challenge, no matter how dangerous. He always starts out with a positive outlook, never looking at the downside of things. He is very social when it comes to Soul Reapers and people possessing spiritual powers, but towards normal humans, he is usually silent, cold, and slightly paranoid. Unless it's a girl. Overall, Yuujin is a trusting, fair companion, but, if you get set on his bad side, he can be a deadly opponent.

Division: 2nd Division

Likes: Food, Girls, training, new discoveries, science, fact

Dislikes: Fiction, rejection, Uneducated guesses, Being hungry, False assumptions, kids

Specialties: Is an excellent Soccer player, Can easily hack into any Computer IP or firewall, Is an expert strategist.

History: Yuujin was never a force to be reckoned with. He never fought for what he wanted. At a young age, he always thought better of it to give people what they wanted, despite his onw needs, and to just forget about it. These thoughts troubled Yuujins parents slightly, due to the fact that he always would come home in a depressed state, never in a good mood. Yuujin spent most of his life giving into peoples whims. But he was a good natured human. He never thought bad of anyone, and if he did, it was rare. He liked helping others, for the sole purpose of seeing them happy. Than, unexpectedly, he died. Yuujin was traveling around, where he saw a kid in distress drowning. Hurriedly, he attempted to save him, but the kid, smiling evilly at him, dragged him under the water, where he died. No one knows if it's a hollow or just a demented child

{WIP}

Sample Chapter: As the boat headed off, Etai began to wonder how the darkness had even spread about. Had someone accidentally dumped just a little to much while relieving themselves? Is this just a really big trick devised by Kazangakure, ready to reclaim their country? Or was it something else? Something more sinister... Etai could only dream of what this was. He needed to know, and he felt the answers to his questions rested at the Hidden Desert village. He heard the waves crashing against the boat, and the captain shouting at some of the crew members. He leaned against the railing, and strained his eyes to see the horizon. He wanted to see the magnificent line that separated the vast ocean, to the endless sky.

Etai ran his hands through his vibrant green hair, and felt his pants shake a little. the problem was, there was no breeze. He spun around, his kunai flying, and was face to face with a little 8 year old bearing the Nadaregakure sign on his shirt. He looked hungry.

"What do you want, kid?"

" I... please, I need food.. My mum's not feeling well, and we are all out."

Etai looked at the kid sorrowful, and, reaching into his pocket, he took out the last of his own food, a few energy bars stashed inside his pocket, and handed them to the boy. HE smiled widely and gave Etai a hug. The Edrick, not having felt one in quite some time, didn't object. The boy finished, smiled at Etai with a face that showed admiration, and ran off to his mother. The Chuunin stared at the two for a long while. His mother not looking very old, but bearing a cane and leaning against the railing of the boat. The boy smiled happily, and his mother took one glance at Etai, and her face became a mixture of shock and rage. She gabbed the energy bars from her son, and threw them off the side of the boat, and scolded him. Etai felt his forehead. Great. His headband was on and his green hair was showing. The mother pulled the boy away, and not it was his turn to look at Etai with an apologetic look. He followed his mother disgruntledly, and Etai had just enough time to notice a single energy bar in his pocket.


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Jojo Kaguya
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Join date : 2011-04-24
Age : 30

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PostSubject: Re: Yuujin Ihen (Redone)   Yuujin Ihen (Redone) I_icon_minitimeWed Aug 17, 2011 2:06 am

You say this person is 899 and yet you have the oddasity to put only two paragraphs as history. Please do better than this. At least one paragraph of human life, one of his academy, and then two of the years to follow. Do this and it'll be all I can say for this app.

(I am not of the staff but am a senior member of this site. My word is not gold but can be highly profitable.)
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